We need lollies in our lunch box.

Mr Naidoo, I  choose that if we are allowed to have lollies in our lunch box because for the past 3 years you have been telling the whole school that we were band of bringing lollies to school. Did you know lollies give us sugar high, makes your breath smell refreshing and gives you more energy. We know it can make us fat, but when we get high we can also burn of the sugar.

Firstly I think that room 9 should take lollies to school only because we never had junk food. Plus we are always good in class . Also we never muck around with the teacher.

Secondly it will make your breath smell like mintys.  

Thirdly when you  work you can work fast and finish faster.

So please let only room 9 put lollies in our lunch box and take  lollies to school.
   

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